image 1; to be changed i am not happy with the composition, i believe this part of the story is too strong for them to be squished on one page, i think they need more space to breathe, although its the part where the bearskin starts taking over his, body life, heart, soul, mind.
image 2; hes had enough of the bearskin and goes to stand on the bridge (image which has to be changed) to put and end to his life, although he hears a cry from a woman and child under a bridge, he then knew how he could get through it, by giving the devils wealth which he gained to the poor. i tryed making the image into a note of money.
image 3; his dreams change 'he now dreamed that he walked on a cloud of butterflies which shielded him from the devil. He knew that the butterflies were the prayers of the poor.' i have chosen to depict this image with angel wings, showing the protectiveness and the wings to represent the butterflies, i used a uplifting colour to try and show the turning point in the story, offering hope.
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